Photo Essay Project: Littering by Esther Kim on Prezi
Body Paragraph B: However, the best way to deal with the problem of littering would be a long-term solution involving educating the younger generation. Littering is common due to the fact that many people are not fully aware of the environmental and health impacts that it has. By raising awareness and building a habit of disposing of waste correctly, this problem can be eradicated in coming generations.
17/12/2012 · Do you think littering should stop
Body Paragraph A: Having bigger fines is certainly one way to tackle the issue of littering. Increasing the fines will make people take littering more seriously. At present, many people litter the streets because they do not consider this to be a serious offence and for the convenience but by imposing a considerable penalty, people will think twice before they litter.
You have introduced the essay question clearly and you have presented an opinion. It could be improved if you work on your grammar – there are some errors. It would be better to remove this part : “but some people are still doing even they don’t have any conscience.” because it is unnecessary and contains too many errors. Your thesis statement could be improved by writing “In my opinion, while I totally agree with this view, I also believe that having more bins is another essential solution.”. That way you have introduced your idea.